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Faith corrodes like rusted iron—easy and quick in all this wet, salt-heavy air.
Sent to shadow a reclusive priest, Jeongguk's devotion starts to waver even further.
I knew from this alone without looking at the saved WIPs that it was yours and also I get a really bad migraine whenever I read your works because of how sophisticated and real the prose is.
no notes on anything (because i'm bound to secrecy) but. i. don't think you should be getting a migraine reading anything??? unless you meant my stuff makes you guys Think/you like this feeling, in which case........ i'm pleased with that i think �
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ey ey ey come here!!!! no self depreciation in this house! i was just concerned HONESTLY because i keep getting the vibe that i get too into the Vision(tm) of a fic in my head and i don't spell it out well enough for people! so this is, like!!!! very good! i love learning how to make my stuff better and/or more accessible to you guys! 🫂 and also i have been called out on my comma splices so ...... i think your english class is right, i just love fucking up grammar rules to make things sound lyrical LOL
(i do have to admit i love it when books make me think/google things so the fact that you sent this in....... i'm over the moon ok. just making sure you know!!!)
I consider myself as someone who isn't /that/ smart minded, so reading your prose makes me question everything I learned in English class despite it being my first language, so keep up the good work, because I learn something new everyday.