Aside from obvious grammar and spelling mistakes, which is all expected from a 12yo, they made no sense lol. Like, I wrote a Chuck E x Helen smutfic and kid me had no idea how to write a sex scene, so it came off cringey. Plus, there were scenes that were random and made zero sense, almost felt like a shitpost (Like I randomly inserted Wolfgang from Animal Crossing, idk WHY).

So yeah, they just came off cringey at best.